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Showing posts with label love scenes. Show all posts
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Monday, October 5, 2009

Writing Christian Romance

Hello Fellow Writers!

Sorry I'm putting this up so late today, I was having technical difficulties. I won't bore you with them but suffice to say I couldn't post a new blog till now. Grrr.

Yesterday I put my revisions for "The Movie Star's Very Personal Assistant" into the computer and emailed them to my Advanced Writing Class, who liked them. I didn't do any plotting for "Snowed in With a Millionaire". I know, I know, what is wrong with me? The good news is that I now have a real deadline - I need to have this outline finished by the end of October because I have to write the whole novel in the month of November! Yes, you heard me. I'll be participating in NaNoWriMo this year.

Now, you're probably wondering what a good Jewish girl like me is doing blogging about writing Christian Romance. But maybe you're interested in writing inspirational romance that's faith based. I like the idea since I consider myself very spiritual and even a bit religious (Jewish though of course) but my understanding is they really want you to be Christian to write for them. One of the interesting things about writing inspirational romance is they have extremely specific rules that must be followed. Here is what Steeple Hill requires, from eHarlequin.com:


Mission Statement
Steeple Hill’s fiction program features wholesome Christian entertainment that will help women to better guide themselves, their families and other women in their communities toward purposeful, faith-driven lives.
Length: 55,000–60,000 words
Executive Editor: Joan Marlow Golan
Senior Editor in charge of line: Melissa Endlich
Senior Editor: Tina James
Assistant Editor: Emily Rodmell
Editorial Assistant: Sarah McDaniel
Editorial office: New York
Heartwarming Inspirational Romance
The Love Inspired line is a series of contemporary, inspirational romances that feature Christian characters facing the many challenges of life and love in today's world.
Each story should have an emotional, satisfying and mature romance; however, the characters should not make love unless they are married. These are "sweet" romances. Any physical interactions (i.e., kissing, hugging) should emphasize emotional tenderness rather than sexual desire or sensuality. Please avoid any mention of nudity.
All stories should focus on one hero and heroine who meet as early in the book as possible. The hero and heroine should be on the page together in the first chapter—the first page is even better. By the end of the story the main characters should be in a committed relationship.
In addition, we are looking for opening chapters that are compelling and grab the reader’s attention from the first line of the story. Some ways to create effective openings are to employ dialogue, keep paragraphs short, or open with a dramatic situation. Ineffective openings tend to occur when there is little or no dialogue or the author focuses on background and setup (e.g., heroine is in a car/bus/train/plane, reviewing the reasons why she is returning to or leaving her hometown).
Drama, humor and even a touch of mystery all have a place in the series. Foul language, taking the Lord’s name in vain, euphemisms for curses (heck, darn, gosh) and scenes containing violent content do not. Any subplots should come directly from the main story. Secondary characters (children, family, friends, neighbors, fellow church members, etc.) can also help contribute to a substantial and gratifying story. Stories should be in the third person. Stories can have international settings, though the main characters should be North American.
An element of faith must be present in the books, and should be well-integrated into the plot. The conflict between the main characters should be an emotional one, arising naturally from the story. And the progression of the story must incorporate the faith journey of hero and heroine, whether struggling to accept faith or simply being active members of their church community. By the end of the story, hero and heroine must be both believers and members of a church community.
Because Steeple Hill sells to both CBA and ABA bookstores, we must adhere to CBA conventions. The stories may not include alcohol consumption by Christian characters, card playing, gambling or games of chance (including raffles), explicit scatological terms, hero and heroine remaining overnight together alone, Halloween celebrations, magic or the mention of intimate body parts. Lying is also problematic in the CBA market and characters who are Christian should avoid lying or deceiving others. Exceptions can be made but must be approved by an editor.
We are looking for authors writing from a Christian worldview and conveying their personal faith and ministry values in entertaining fiction that will touch the hearts of believers and seekers everywhere.



See, I'm not sure I'd be able to convey my "ministry values". Plus I love sexual tension in stories, and that's a big no-no here.


Yesterday DH and I saw the movie "Surrogates" with Bruce Willis. It was good - it kinda made me want a surrogate...

Today I will work on "Snowed In With A Millionaire". Wish me luck and good luck to you too!

Yours Truly,
Shoshanna Evers

Friday, September 25, 2009

"First Draft in 30 Days"



Hello Fellow Writers!

Yesterday my goal was to take the love scenes in my romance novel "Marrying a Movie Star" to the next level, since I've recognized that my book is less Harlequin Romance and more Silhouette Desire...

Perhaps it's because I've been living with my Hero and Heroine for so long, so I know them as well as I know myself - but it wasn't difficult to add a couple of romantic love scenes and an extra kiss in the places where I knew the characters wanted to be with each other. They had previously been kept from consummating their passion by the fact that I was nervous about my father reading the book!

So I got a lot done yesterday. I also emailed out the first chapter to my book to my writing teacher, and so far the response has been quite positive. Yay!

I could have gotten even more done and worked more on "Snowed in with a Millionaire", but all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so I stayed up late watching "The Biggest Loser" on Hulu.com. I was amazed that they could lose like 25 lbs in a week. Seriously.

I pulled another book off of my shelf to review for you, "First Draft in 30 Days" by Karen S. Weisner. Titles like that hook me every single time. I love the idea of writing a book in a month. It hasn't happened yet, but I still love the idea.

Really what the book guides you to do is to create a very detailed outline, similar to the 40 page plot synopsis I've been writing for my work in progress based on 'The Marshall Plan for Novel Writing" by Evan Marshall. Weisner has written over 20 books, so her method must work for her. Unfortunately, the book is a bit dry. My main problem with it is I don't jump up and down with inspiration as I read it. On the other hand, another book that promotes writing a first draft in 30 days, "No Plot! No Problem" by Chris Baty, the founder of National Novel Writing Month, does make me get all excited and ready to write. So there you have it. By the way, NaNoWriMo is coming up in November and I'm seriously considering joining in on the fun.

Left brain thinkers might like "First Draft in 30 Days" more than I did. Weisner does have a lot of good information and suggestions, however - including letting your outline sit for a while before you go back and look at it. I remember Stephen King said in his book "On Writing" that he did the same thing.

Today my goal is to work on my plot for "Snowed in with a Millionaire".

Wish me luck and good luck to you too!
Yours Truly,
Shoshanna Evers